Are my lyrics too... much?

wtf ok i have nothing against "emo" people which you may or may not be but that song is way or the top. i hate the verses. but i like the chorus. i really think if you expanded off you the chorus you could have something. i like the chorus with some changes. i would like to use and expand upon the chorus and make my own song out of it if you would let me use it. keep working at it